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a ratio of freckles to starsvirginia,

you are floating away in
every direction:

a universe
of sunlight & marrow bones
i want to know

your touch
had vertigo then--
a certain horse sadness

i remember how you
would swallow the stars:
watch them glow through your cheeks

(no one told you
what they thought of light & dying
of being a constellation
drawn across your face)

you are the milky way:
a firefly drowning

but i will trail you--
hold your coat above the water

(a star
exploding a million miles away
with a number for a name)
This is my girlfriend.This is my girlfriend.
I found her all on my own.
She’s little,
And broken.
But still good.
Yeah,
Still good.
cool breeze across sultry skinorange morning
riverside
in the wind 
reeds bend 
like backs
yours arches 
like a bridge
in my breath
and my two lips cross 
your soft skin connection 
to reach the end
the heartland
open and waiting for me
There isThere is;

     Joy in your laughter, music in your voice
            Dance in your step, confidence in your stride
                  Pride in your heart, tranquility in your mind
                        Sweetness in your smile, fierceness in your eyes
                              Comfort in your presence, tenderness in your embrace

Nothing quite compares
CountermelodiesWhen it begins,
it’s like discovering
the decadence of music.
Perhaps your breath hitches
on the cello carrying the countermelody.
It reminds you of their voice,
as they warm spices in the kitchen
and you’d wrap your arms around them from behind,
like the horns come up from under
and saturate the harmony.
Their body feels familiar in all different ways,
a second listen granted to a beautiful movement.

You can’t tell them you repeat
the first song they showed you
because it smells like their skin
If you listen close enough.
And they can’t tell you that
they try to harmonize with your
speaking voice on the phone
Dancing with the Fairies   EnglandxReader

  Emerald leaves, orange light,
  Swaying bluebells, pink clouds,
  Rustling trees, calling birds,
  In the stillness of the forest.

  We wandered from the gravel path,
  Careful where we trod,
  Not to crush the innocent flowers,
  That tinted a fine fragrance.

  Past the great oak,
  Beyond the pine and beech,
  Our fingers entwined together,
  My hand locked safely in his.

  Great gorges and steep cliffs,
  We passed before an opening,
  Where light shone through gracefully,
  Catching on mysterious forms.

  The rosebay willowherb seeds
  Floated and waltzed effortlessly
  Through the air and caugh
A Lack of EloquenceYou told me you wanted to be a writer someday
And I couldn't help but wonder if you'd ever written about me
I went home and tried to write something beautiful about you
But I couldn't find the words
I don't know how to describe the kindness in your eyes
Or the way your voice sends shivers down my spine
Or how you linger in my dreams at night
No matter how I string my words together
They never quite seem to do you justice
You must forgive me for my lack of eloquence
And understand all the things I'm trying to tell you
When at last, for all my trying, the only words I have are these:
"I love you, I love you, I love you"
You are a bittersweet beauty with hips that lie.Do I crave you because I crave a intense muse?

Poetry flows from my lips.

My heart bruises,

soul feels ripped.

I still want you.

I don’t need you.

I want you.

I want your flesh upon mine.

Whiskey lips and hips that don’t lie.

Bone against bone.

My body is my home.

Experience the bittersweet beauty.
BeautySmiling into the sunshine I go,
the warm rays on my face as I walk.
The world around me is vibrant,
every color rushing to meet my gaze.
The world seems as if it is waiting for me,
opening its beauty to my eyes.
A drop of water touches my face,
from the sky they fall,
bringing out new color and life.
I sit in the rain as around me it falls.
I would try to find the most beautiful things,
but you are the most beautiful thing of all.
It hurtIt hurt you know,
Falling for you.

I felt very bump and bang,
Every bruise and break.
I tried to hold on,
I tried to slow down,
I tried to stop.
But it was inevitable.
Gravity was too much,
It kept pulling me down
To you.

And when I landed,
When I hit the ground
At your feet
I could barely breathe.
It was too much
For anyone to handle
Let alone me.

But I watched you reach down,
And felt you pick me up.
You gathered together
All my broken pieces
And worked for days
Making me whole again.

It took time
But I finally realised
That for me to fall down to you
Meant that you
Had fallen too.

So once I was rebuilt
I searched for your missing p
Eternal LoveI never thought this day would come so soon.
And yet I always knew it was to come.
For we are nothing but another side of each other.
For all those years we were two sides of a single coin,
Spinning round and round but never facing one another, never meeting.
But those days have passed. We have joined in more ways than one.
And now we complete each other, black and white, white and black…
Different but the same. We will always continue to fly under the same sky.
Together. Nothing else matters but the connection we share.
This connection which binds us, it runs through our veins, through our blood, long before we ever met.
Eternal. Like the symbols that matched our colours and understood our souls. 
let's play pretendplease hold me close and keep your eyes shut
i'll become the girl who broke your heart
and you'll be the boy who broke mine
ThiefCant you see she's a thief?
She stole your heart
And your breath
Now she's stealing your last name.
Happy Birthday Fox!Every moment spent with you,
Everything which we once knew,
Is now melting into the past,
You and I, our futures last.

Together our souls burn bright,
Like a hearth and candlelight,
Late night talks or daylight hours,
Poems about us, or poems about flowers,

Though we are so far apart.
You are forever engraved in my heart,
Each passing second with you,
Is worth a lifetime to me.
Eternity.Love.
There aren’t any words that can explain our love.
You smiles with your eyes,
You brighten the world with your laugh,
This love sparkles brighter than the moon,
And the burning sun.
You lights the darkness
You stand out from the flock.
Every kiss is the softest touch,
This love is a soft beauty.
The thought of knowing you are mine
Is like a time of magic
The night we met was endless magic
Dancing in the moonlight is a magical moment
That I always forever cherish
I will love you till infinity ends
Like ying and yang, you and me
Eternity
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The fire in my eyes
I should use to light underneath me
To move me from this hesitation
And get back to reality
Finally break from the shell that I was encased in
I just needed the right motivation
To clear my head
With this verbal redemption

Karma may have paid you a visit my dear
But too little too late I fear
Hide behind those words you write if it makes you sleep better
Justifying your actions as if that makes the heartbreak any easier
Don't even try to relate, you've never been in my head
So walk on..keep thinking that lie of 'our love' instead
Don't think you did me a favor
Giving me that 'clean break'?
That's only a slight sting I'll savor
But that'll be your biggest mistake

You're not as complex as you think
It's purely black and white
You knew what you'd do when you called  
So stop questioning whether it was right
That 'burn' you gave....
Ha! Darlin I walked through those flames unscathed
However I did cry thats true...
But only briefly were those tears for you

My heart remains intact...
as the roots grow back into place
I'm now going to take my time...
my feelings dont belong in this rat race
If I was your 'best thing'
You sure were in a hurry to give up
But now I can move on...
and away from this fuck up

You gave me your worst
When you proclaimed to be your best
Since you've been gone...
So much better now I rest

So what you've learned from your lessons remember them fondly
I'm walking away from you never looking back behind me
I deserve to laugh and smile
Such feelings I haven't had in a while
To finally be happy with someone who knows me right
Gives me a good reason to be up all night...
I want to feel those heart flutters and have my words adorably stutter
When I'm around this one man that makes me feel like no other

I'll never be bitter or hateful
Instead I'm forever grateful
As this dismal smoke clears..I finally see
I can now move on and eventually fall in love again...
With a wonderful man that would sit next to me holding my hand
Feeling safe and complete..making me laugh til theres pain in my cheeks
I can't wait to see each day that comes now
A future I once thought so bleak

You can keep saying that you tried..but in the end you failed miserably
I dont care for your regret...you will never again have me  
So keep staring at those pictures and read those poems of the 'love' that you didnt want to stay
You've lost me forever...you'll have to live with that everyday

 
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Critique by ~IlluminizedRed Dec 24, 2012, 8:26:25 AM
I really enjoyed reading this, it was filled with a lot of great lines that held a lot of emotion. I don't think a lot of people could freely write a poem like this while painting a picture in the reader's mind.

Magnificent work :heart: :clap:

It seems like a very personal poem directed at someone or something that has actually happened to you. If not, you are a really great writer to be able to put it into the perspective of one who has been heartbroken, loved, and lied to. I believe that other people could take this poem and direct it to someone who has harmed them in the same way. It takes talent to do something like that.
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*PrYmO-ART Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I wanted to write a critique, but i realized your work was amazing...and didnt need to improve, or be changed. i wonder....tho...who it is about, or if it is about anyone
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Mood: Adoration ~IlluminizedRed Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful
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Mood: Joy *DeenaBella Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you !
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~IlluminizedRed Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :D
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